A New Song! I've Forgotten

I usually save this blog for peotry and my mindless rantings, but I haven't really written much new, so I thought I would put up a song I wrote yesterday (3/29/06). I am not totally happy with teh chorus and will most likely tweak it, but the idea is there.

I'VE FORGOTTEN

Built on the foundation
Of a lifetime of fears
Standing, grounded
On waves of tears
My sense of self
Handed down to me
Living the life
Of someones elses dreams

CHORUS
I've forgotten
What I once knew
I've forgotten
What it is to be me
I've forgotten
I've forgotten
How to remember

I woke up last night
Splashed water on my face
Looking at the strnger
Who has taken my place
I managed a whisper
To ask which way
Just a starting point
To find my way back to me

CHORUS

BRIDGE
The very next morning
I lay awake in bed
Thinking upon a time
When some of it made sense
Stumbling towards tomorrow
Struggling with the past
I can't I can't even see today
Just goes by too fast
I see the sun rising
I havewn't seen in awhile
A memory driftsd in
I feel a soft smile

CHORUS
I've forgotten
What I once knew
I've forgotten
What it is to be me
I've forgotten
I've forgotten
But...
I think...
I'm starting to remember
©2006 Franz Hoff

So, any thoughts? Whaddaya tink huh?
Til next time...
PL&P~